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  1. #1
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    Default The newest song I've written

    No one is probably going to respond to this but I went through a test message with a friend and I had to find these lyrics for a song I wrote. i originally had the lyrics in my laptop but I smashed my laptop last Saturday and if I hadn't have texted my friend the lyrics the song would have been lost forever because I stupidly didn't write it down on paper. This is a song about my friend Jaclyn who I haven't seen since our Red Lobster dinner date.

    Dinner With Jaclyn.
    When the night fell down we were driving around
    I looked at you in the dark
    A candle lit view of your face in my view
    Two of us in the dark
    You laughed, I smiled, we talked
    This night was my world
    In the end there was never again
    So much for all I could do
    In the freezing cold night lit up with moonlight
    With cigarettes to burn
    Wishing there could be more with a future in store
    Going down University
    You laughed, I smiled, we talked
    You brought me something new
    I'll be down if you want me around
    I'll be playing your song

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    Aww it's beautiful

    I tried to sing it but I failed >.>
    Last edited by purplerose; 02-12-2019 at 10:46 AM. Reason: signature violation

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    Quote Originally Posted by KittChu View Post
    Aww it's beautiful

    I tried to sing it but I failed >.>
    I appreciate that Kittchu. Right now there is no music to it so i am not able to sing it either. Don't really even have a melody for it.

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    I can only think of this being played slow and smooth. Almost an Electronica style though I don't think you are fond of this genre.

    Well written and I hope you will come up with a nice melody for it!


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    Quote Originally Posted by Magdalina View Post
    I can only think of this being played slow and smooth. Almost an Electronica style though I don't think you are fond of this genre.

    Well written and I hope you will come up with a nice melody for it!

    i actually do like some electronic music it but I've never written or performed any of it.

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    Great song! Congrats! I like electronic music too and try to make my own music and want to become a pro one day. Luckily I found blog for beginners on https://bluebuzzmusic.com/high-quali...acks-and-kits/ with useful tips and tutorials. Hope with its help 'll create my first track in the near future.
    Last edited by joombo; 03-07-2019 at 03:16 PM.

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    Nice song!

 

 

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